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Re: Training sign-up thread
« Reply #30 on Jan 9, 2007, 6:11pm »

OK I did modify my profile hope its ok I changed jutsu into magic as you are right that some may not understand what it is. And magic is more rpg like than jutsu....

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Re: Training sign-up thread
« Reply #31 on Jan 9, 2007, 6:35pm »

That's much better.
And now your bio is longer too.

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Re: Training sign-up thread
« Reply #32 on Jan 10, 2007, 5:38pm »

Thanks a lot for your advice hey!

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Re: Training sign-up thread
« Reply #33 on Jan 12, 2007, 6:22pm »

Here is mine. Added a few limiting factors also. Hope it's cool.

First Name/s: Alicia Jasmin
Surname: Forgotten

Age: 18
Race: Human
Gender: Female

Class: Leech / Manipulator

Looks:
Alicia has a youthful beauty, an air of uncaring childishness about her mixed with the seductive looks of a female approaching womanhood. She is around 5ft6" with a skinny build. She has brown hair with a crisp sheen, a tidy fringe above the eyes with the rest falling neatly down to below the breast (or alternatively tied up into two pigtails on the top of her head). Wearing tight, blue jeans and a plain gray top, with a dark jacket over it holding quite a few pockets on and around it. Her pupils change with her mood, usually an electric blue when docile and calm, which people sometime take to be contact lenses. Other details include the two colourful bangles on her right wrist and one on her left, plus a simple pair of green stud earrings.

Personality:
Manipulating, wistful, a delicate flower until angered. No one matters more than she. Like a teenager she dislikes authority and gets stroppy when things do not go her way. This can subside to bursts of anger when provoked. It is in her opinion that she is always right and everyone else is wrong. She is vain and disloyal, but good looking so most people don't care. Despite her misgivings, she is also quite intelligent and an extremely talented actor. She prefers not to fight people directly unless it is the only option, preferring to take out her opponents with little hassle as well as wanting to fulfill her enjoyment of outsmarting others.

Held Objects:
> An average sized diary, held together by a bright pink, cheap-looking soft plastic sleeve, a small flap holding a metal button fastener keeping the pages secure. Across the corners are darker straps of pink, purely for decoration.
> Various pens and pencils hidden around her person.

About the Diary

What is the Diary? Is it a tool of the demons or something left behind by whatever came before? Whatever its origins, it is certain the book itself is alive in some form, for some reason choosing a 'carrier' to take it places so that it can feed on the life energy of others - though that does not seem to be the main reason, seeing as it could just as easily sprout legs and find life to suck dry with its powers of leeching over a distance. Perhaps the reason is its imagination; or rather lack of it. The form this being has chosen is that of a diary, something for others to add ideas and thoughts to, an aspect the being seems to desire to help it overcome its more lateral-thinking mind and give it a further survival edge.

The being that inhabits (or is) the book also becomes part of the 'carrier' on first contact, being able to replace itself from the life-force of said person if anything untoward happens. It is a cautious being, despite its greed to devour more energy; it has been shown that it is extremely hard to destroy the book in the first place unless it is the wish of the carrier, with its ability to absorb most types of energy directed upon it, such as from weapons. It is a leech, a dirty parasite, yet everyday I am drawn to use its cursed gifts increasingly each day.

What it does with the energy it collects... this is a question that has answers I am aware of and some I am not. What I have witnessed I will explain nonetheless; the book has the ability to change its size, material structure as well as other basic shape-shifting abilities, which from a shape-shifting being should not be too surprising, and with more energy the abilities become greater. Now linking back to the idea of its supposed lack of imagination, it appears the being cannot do more than comparatively simple things without aid, which is another thing I still do not understand seen as it must have turned itself into the diary at some point...but I will not digress from perhaps the most important and frightening power of the diary - what the carrier writes inside the pages will come true.
Of course there are limits; it is not as if the diary can vanquish a world at its whim, thank the Great Beyond. The diary can only complete actions roughly equal to the energy it has absorbed. It is my theory that the being is something trans-dimensional, seeing the world more as building blocks than absolutes, allowing it to manipulate the world as it does in ways I cannot comprehend.

Another limiting factor is the strength of mind of the carrier. Where as a sub-human mind may even be able bend reality, it is near impossible for the average person to do something to that extent or create something that would surpass their own inherited perceptions of the world (things much beyond the persons understanding, etc).

Despite its evil...no, that is too strong a word, "strong will to survive" perhaps, it is very protective of its carrier. These actions may ultimately be to protect itself, though that is not what I sense. Perhaps it is turning me already.

I have written this so that if I fail in destroying this monster and removing its seductive powers from our lands, the next carrier will know what I know without the wasteful sacrifice. It took the energy of many lives to burn this into the pages of the diary...

- Notes written in the back pages of the Diary, author unknown

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Re: Training sign-up thread
« Reply #34 on Jan 12, 2007, 9:38pm »

Okay. Nice idea you got.

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include the two colourful bangles on her right wrist

What colour is coulourful?

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absorb most types of energy directed upon it, such as from weapons

Does this only include energy type weapons, or any weapon?

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What it does with the energy it collects

How exactly does it collect energy?

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what the carrier writes inside the pages will come true.

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- Notes written in the back pages of the Diary, author unknown

So, did the things that was written at the back come true?

Lastly, I notice you don't have any history of Alicia whatsoever.
Please add some. It is an important part.

Modify and I'll rate it.

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Re: Training sign-up thread
« Reply #35 on Jan 12, 2007, 11:27pm »

First Name/s: Alicia Jasmin
Surname: Forgotten

Age: 18
Race: Human
Gender: Female

Class: Leech / Manipulator

Looks:
Alicia has a youthful beauty, an air of uncaring childishness about her mixed with the seductive looks of a female approaching womanhood. She is around 5ft6" with a skinny build. She has brown hair with a crisp sheen, a tidy fringe above the eyes with the rest falling neatly down to below the breast (or alternatively tied up into two pigtails on the top of her head). Wearing tight, blue jeans and a plain gray top, with a dark jacket over it holding quite a few pockets on and around it. Her pupils change with her mood, usually an electric blue when docile and calm, which people sometime take to be contact lenses. Other details include the two colourful bangles on her right wrist (red and the green further up) and one on her left (blue), plus a simple pair of green stud earrings.

Personality:
Manipulating, wistful, a delicate flower until angered. No one matters more than she. Like a teenager she dislikes authority and gets stroppy when things do not go her way. This can subside to bursts of anger when provoked. It is in her opinion that she is always right and everyone else is wrong. She is vain and disloyal, but good looking so most people don't care. Despite her misgivings, she is also quite intelligent and an extremely talented actor. She prefers not to fight people directly unless it is the only option, preferring to take out her opponents with little hassle as well as wanting to fulfill her enjoyment of outsmarting others.

Held Objects:
> An average sized diary, held together by a bright pink, cheap-looking soft plastic sleeve, a small flap holding a metal button fastener keeping the pages secure. Across the corners are darker straps of pink, purely for decoration.
> Various pens and pencils hidden around her person.

About the Diary

What is the Diary? Is it a tool of the demons or something left behind by whatever came before? Whatever its origins, it is certain the book itself is alive in some form, for some reason choosing a 'carrier' to take it places so that it can feed on the life energy of others - though that does not seem to be the main reason, seeing as it could just as easily sprout legs and find life to suck dry with its powers of leeching. Perhaps the reason is its imagination; or rather lack of it. The form this being has chosen is that of a diary, something for others to add ideas and thoughts to, an aspect the being seems to desire to help it overcome its more lateral-thinking mind and give it a further survival edge.

The being that inhabits (or is) the book also becomes part of the 'carrier' on first contact, it is able to replace itself from the life-force of said person if anything untoward happens...and it is still not clear whether it connects with the first human it comes across or chooses a host according to certain personallity traits or 'compatibility'. It is a cautious being, despite its greed to devour more energy; it has been shown that it is extremely hard to destroy the book utterly unless it is the wish of the carrier, with its ability to absorb most types of energy directed upon it, including most physical exersion lain against it. It is a leech, a dirty parasite, yet everyday I am drawn to use its cursed gifts increasingly each day...the power to create using life that is stolen.

What it does with the energy it collects... this is a question that has answers I am aware of and some I am not. What I have witnessed I will explain nonetheless; the book has the ability to change its size, material structure as well as other basic shape-shifting abilities, which from a shape-shifting being should not be too surprising, and with more energy the abilities become greater. Now linking back to the idea of its supposed lack of imagination, it appears the being cannot do more than comparatively simple things without aid, which is another thing I still do not understand seen as it must have turned itself into the diary at some point...but I will not digress from perhaps the most important and frightening power of the diary - what the carrier writes inside the pages will come true.

Of course there are limits; it is not as if the diary can vanquish a world at its whim, thank the Great Beyond. The diary can only complete actions roughly equal to the energy it has absorbed. It is my theory that the being is something trans-dimensional, seeing the world more as building blocks than absolutes, allowing it to manipulate the world as it does in ways I cannot comprehend. This could also be an answer to its distance leeching - it seems to be able to slowly draw on the life energy of nearby creatures, although at a reduced rate to direct contact, I presume that it can alter itself in its home dimension with little or no change in this one and reach those that are nearby by leaking through. Another limiting factor is the strength of mind of the carrier. Where as a sub-human mind may even be able bend reality, it is near impossible for the average person to do something to that extent or create something that would surpass their own inherited perceptions of the world (things much beyond the persons understanding, etc).

Despite its evil...no, that is too strong a word, "strong will to survive" perhaps, it is very protective of its carrier. These actions may ultimately be to protect itself, though that is not what I sense. Perhaps it is turning me already. I have written this so that if I fail in destroying this monster and removing its seductive powers from our lands, the next carrier will know what I know without the wasteful sacrifice. It took the energy of many lives to burn this into the pages of the diary...

- From notes written in the back pages of the Diary, author unknown

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Re: Training sign-up thread
« Reply #36 on Jan 13, 2007, 6:25am »

Okay. I don't like the idea of the diary absorbing all weapons used on it, but I'll let it go and see what you do in the RP.

By the way, next time, just edit your bio, don't make a new post.

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