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« Reply #20 on Dec 13, 2006, 8:56pm » | |
Name: Kalli Hernan
Species : Angel Hybrid
Appearance: Kalli has long curly to wavy hair. It is a dark ebony and shines with a almost white sheen like glow. The male keeps his appearance up and tried to keep his face flawless without the use of magic. His skin is a nice and deep bronze that gives off something that he may not be as dead as some think, but his features are paled just not as much as it should be. His complexion makes him seem Hindu or even Romanian but no one is certain for his accent changes just about every time he opens his mouth. His eyes are a very decent and lovely round with a slight almond bend. They are a deep almond color or even brown at times. Kalli's form is slender with a mild to almost feminine build to it. His lips are a delicate deep black with a light brown feel to them, they are small and plush like small cotton and are well taken care of.
His body in the nude is a work of art. Flawless in every way and no one has every touched it.. A small almost unnoticed mole set right under the edge of the males left eye, it is a beauty mark he was born with.
Kalli can be seen wearing green all the time. From a basic tunic to a deep pine green armour. The cloth on the tunic is a well made and soft cotton. The small decorations are small leaves. His strong armour is made of something a kin to metal and iron. The heavy matrial is made of somehtign enchanrted to slightly ward off water spells. His boots are the basic brown and needs no laces to secure them in place.
Personality: Kalli is a well tamed male. He is wise beyond his young years and seems to want to keep things in order. He is very calm and collected, very stern and settled at times. Kalli has a bad demeanor. He seems to be a jerk at times, and even a total A$$hole. But that can not be so. The male gets along well with small children and takes his time when talking to them. He takes pride in the old and respects them.
-Likes/Dislikes: Kalli has a deep love for classical music, it seems to make his entire world a better place. Kalli can be seen when not fighting, just simply reading books or making maps of his surrounding areas. He loves his pet Anaconda, Ganymede'.
Ganymede': Kalli's familiar is a long 10 feet long and over 10 inches thick Albino Ananaconda. This serpant is rare and has a color os Light Mint colored eyes. [[Think Mint Chocolate Chip Ice Cream]]. The scales on this snake is a off white with a beige tint to them. A small pattern of a spiral is embedded into his scales. This snake is no Joke what so ever. He can cast mild Fire abilities much like his Master Kalli. Ganyemede' can speak the Human tounuge, but he can speak Telepathicly to Kalli at times. he will not speak if not asked.
-Fears: he fears death like most living beings. Other then that he fears that he may never have a chance to reproduce and make his race a new.
-Beliefs: He believes in Ignasium, a Fire Based Religion that evolves around Fire Magic users and Spirits. He believes in Honesty and justice, but he can been seen even going as far as believing in revenge.
Weapons: A long red Spear. A 6 inch long and nearly 2 inches thick of a blade at the end. The red color is a detailed and shining crimson red with small ruby gloss highlights. At the end of this long spear handle there are a set of gold balls, these balls are decorative. At the end of the small balls is a long string rope. This rope is made of black velvet and it is weaved into a decorative 'upward spiral rope knot. Going back to the head of the Spear, there is a small holder, that holds the large and thick blade in place. There seems to be no magic within it. All that comes from the wielder it self. The Brass holder ,sets off the gold letters that are engraved with the owners name: 'Kalli' in a Gothic text.
Abilities: Flame powers, anything that has something to do with Fire. Kalli is not a master of these moves yet, and he does the simple and basic fireballs and flame Dragon moves. Nothing too great at this moment. He has much to learn and that takes time. He is willing to be taught by anyone and that too, takes time to find someone willing to teach him so.
Background: Kalli was born just off the island of the angelic home; Seren. This angelic society was big on Full Blooded and Pure Blooded beings. Unfortunately for him he was a hybrid, which meant he was a mix of a Angel and some kind of Demi God. It is not certain what his father was, but it was said that he was feared by many that even spoke his name. For a long time the male was casted out of his home land and then tossed away. He then was casted to the mortal world and then sentenced to never return to Seren. He was a mere 7 at the time.
Time passed and soon Kalli's life was pretty uneventful, that old stereo typical and old fashioned poor life. Nothing happened to him until he was taken in by a kind woman named Nala. She was a Tanned female with white hair. Her large wings had been clipped and yet she still wore a smile on her lovely face. Nala took Kalli in and then taught him the basics of being a angel and what was expected of him. She then taught him how to survive as a mortal. Before long Kalli was able to read and write and even play the Violin with ease.
Soon once again the time had seemed to pass with a blink of a eye and then Kalli was faced with everything he could want. Nala told him on his 200th birthday it was time for him to stop hiding and try and go back to Seren. But Kalli knew that even with a heavy heart, that if he left Nala alone she would surely parish. That was not something the Hybrid wanted and so , he made a promise to her. he said: "Holy Mother, I will protect you. And when I am strong enough I will come back for you. I will make you a Queen in that place. For I have no knowledge on why they casted you out. But I will make it so that you are accepted once more..." And with that he left.
Like all stories that make us, this one does not end here, no for when Kalli had found a way to return to his world he was so trilled he went back to the mortal world to tell Nala. But sadly on his return Nala had forgotten all about him and she had moved on. This crushed the Male angel and then Kalli started to be cold and hateful to all those around him. He began to be conceited and then very stern and hard on others. The only things that seemed to bring him joy was the laughter of small children and others suffering.
Now Kalli is here in Centra. There is no reason for it, it just seems that he gave up on everything and even going back to him home. No one knows what it was that he found out, and nor will he say. Kalli keeps that to himself and does not want to share it. He honestly believes that he is not worth going back if it was not with his mentor and mother figure, Nala.
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| | Re: Training sign-up thread
« Reply #21 on Dec 14, 2006, 5:25am » | |
That was a very good bio.
I take it you are an experienced roleplayer...
On thing bothered me though.
Quote:| Abilities: Flame powers, anything that has something to do with Fire. Kalli is not a master of these moves yet, and he does the simple and basic fireballs and flame Dragon moves. Nothing too great at this moment. |
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You could try to tell me more about the abilities.
And I don't know what flame Dragon moves are.
Except for that, I see nothing wrong.
Rating : 8.5/10
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« Reply #22 on Dec 14, 2006, 12:34pm » | |
Gratsi!~
I will do better when I make Lovanice later on. I won't change the mistakes, since I need to learn to be a tad more descriptive. But thank you heaps for that!~ <3 [[Huggles person]]
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« Reply #23 on Dec 14, 2006, 12:57pm » | |
Alright, feel free to join the Training RP anytime.
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« Reply #24 on Jan 2, 2007, 7:08pm » | |
Name: Elaesus
Age: Sixteen
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Physical Description: Normally her dress consists of jean pants patched with an array of differently colored materials and a collared button up long sleeved shirt, with a T-shirt of various colors underneath. Normally she only wears thick white socks, and no shoes. She also carries a wooden cane of a simplistic design every where she goes, but it is not used to help her walk. She uses this to hit the ground as she moves about in her wheelchair. Her legs have always hung useless below her waist.
Her eyes are an ice gray blue, no light reflects within. The life sparkle in them seems to be completely absent. Strange enough at times the pupils are not visible.
Her hair is a deep rich blond and falls in waves down just passed her shoulders. Its texture is silky and smooth to touch, and always tidy and well kept.
Personality Description: She is kind hearted; she always seeks to help others. She does this mostly to help herself. It is to prove to others that despite her disabilities, she still has a sharp mind and her hands are skilled with fined honed practice. After all they are all she has to use in order to make it from day to day. She uses them to the day to day things. She learned this despite her lack of sight. Others looked down upon her, and she hated it. She was not that disabled and unreliable, she had lived this way her whole life. She knew nothing else. She wants to make a name for herself; to be one of great humans in history one of them who had changed the world. One who left the world a better place.
Character Equipment
Motorized wheel chair: It’s a wheel chair with a small combustion motor built into it providing as much as 20 horse power to maneuver her around. It has a joystick like controller built into the left arm rest. It’s made of steel alloy hollow metal rods, with a stuffed Seat cushion covered with black vinyl and a thick leather backing for comfort. The arm rest on each side has leather covering them. The right side has section made for placing the wooden cane inside.
Wooden cane: It’s simply a gnarled old wooden stick about two and half feet in length, that has been cured and covered with a water resistant coat.
Pair of dark sun glasses: A pair of black shades to cover her eyes.
A book bag: Designed to loop on the back of her chair, and be easily reached from the right side, to take out what objects reside within. It contains various paper back books written so the blind can read their contents.
A small knife: This small knife is specially designed to write with on paper, as more so to punch and scratch in the necessary wholes for writing for the blind.
Skills, powers and abilities: She has enhanced Hearing, smell, touch, and taste, but only because of her lack of an ability to see, as she has only used her other senses more than others have.
Skills: She is adept in the Creative Arts. (Her skills in the creative arts includes those that rely on the senses other then visual as she is blind. She is adept in creating music, but not writing it or reading it. She can write, but not in the normal sense. She can create models but those based more on touch then texture, then their acutal appearance.)
She rarely forgets anything she senses with her above average abilities. She can virtually recall any thing she tasted, touched, smelled or heard in the past.
She seems to have a sixth sense. For example if you place her hand on a target, and then let her move on her own away from it. After which you give her a projectile to throw at the target, she hits where she laid her hand. Naturally this is caused and due to her other senses. However, most would think of this is as sixth sense ability.
Her coordination and prowess with her hands and arms, is extremely good. It is far better than most humans. It hasn’t developed into the type of control most skilled martial artists have though.
Character History: Her parents are not known to her, as she was given up at birth, by them. And the legal information had not been released to her yet. She was never adopted, because no one wanted a crippled child. The state ended up having to raise her. Her care takers found her to be quite creative and determined despite her disadvantages.
The Orphanage and its caretakers: The Orphanage possessed few people who actually cared about their charges, on top of this it was a run down one with little money given to it. Well it could be said some of them was annoyed, some were not. The ones, who truly cared, were different though, they seemed to always have joy and seeing the children faces here and there. In fact the ones that had physical disabilities like Elaesus they cared more for and truly cherished. They were a reminder as to what humans really represented. A flawed race, with its own difficulties, they could remember the love they were capable of, the way nature could permanently twist them, even before they lived life like others.
The one caretaker that stood out: The woman cared and defended Elaesus no matter what. Other children, who made fun of her, were punished and set right. Adults who disagreed with her wrath were soon defeated and sought to force their authority elsewhere. Her name was Gwen and later she would introduce Elaesus to a world she never knew, for Gwen was no human, she was hidden among them at a great risk; because she saw a part of humanity others had forgotten and wanted to cherish it. But soon that came to crashing end when her identity was discovered. Gwen knew with her alone they wouldn't be satisfied, they'd want the child too, because her care for it, would make them perceive Elaesus was some how her child and her condition her fault. Perhaps if they found out she was no such thing then diseased by her presence would then be their next conclusion, now Gwen had to fly Elaesus to safety.
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« Reply #25 on Jan 2, 2007, 7:24pm » | |
I don't see anything wrong with it...
Only one thing bothers me.
I know it's not important, but...
Quote:| Skills: She is adept in the Creative Arts. |
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What exactly does this mean?
Is she good at drawing, writing, or what?
And another thing. Your history seems a bit short. Maybe lengthen it a little.
Except for that...Very good.
Rating : 9.5/10
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« Reply #26 on Jan 7, 2007, 7:37pm » | |
Ano is this where I post my Bio? Oh well here goes!
Name: Saya/Nayru
Gender: Female
Age: 17
Species: Human Experiment
Appearance: Thin with long red hair tied up in two low ponytails… Has green determined eyes… Wears a rather short black kimono with short sleeves and long tights coming up past her knees. On the back of the kimono is an angel wing imprint. Wears a blue striped long scarf that flows behind her.
Personality: Saya is a happy go lucky girl yet shy at some times. She is very determined and never gives up. She may look naïve due to her appearance and does seem to have a childlike innocence. Therefore she seems to be always in trouble.
She likes ice cream (but manages to stay thin) meeting new people and learning the secret behind peoples techniches.
She is petrified of being alone due to the time she had been experimented on
YET!
Saya has an alter ego named Nayru who only appears when Saya fights or when Saya feels threatened. Nayru is vicious and feels nothing. In perspective Nayru is the person Saya secretly wishes to be.
Weapons: Saya has no weapons but rather a lost forgotten art called jutsu which is almost like magic. When Saya fights her alter is awakened and her body filled with Strange markings that cover her entire body. These markings also glow a bright blue.
Abilities
Sakura Tornado: An ability that makes Saya summon a force spinning almost like a tornado and which slices the enemy with sakura petals (cherry blossoms)
Healing : A strong healing spell capable of almost bringing the dead back to life
Light sword: A sword made out of entirely jutsu is summoned. This ability is very strong and Nayru only uses it as a last resort. It weakens her terribly.
Defensive Dragon: Lets Saya create a barrier between herself and the enemy wit a dragon made out of jutsu.
(?) : Saya/Nayru once destroyed her entire home town with a strange power.
This power has only been unlocked once and Saya is terrified of ever using it again.
Saya is constantly trying to invent new jutsus and abilities. When fighting an opponent she will generally first let her opponent weaken her then after figuring out her opponent own ability swiftly deal the final blow.
Background: Saya was born on an island with a good friend on the same day. When she was merely 7 they took her and her friend to a planet with a research facility where they were horribly experimented on. Saya ‘s friend managed to help her escape and the two went back to their island. However on returning the people who had taken them away was busy murdering all of the townsfolk in an effort to find Saya and her friend.
Saya panicking made a promise to her friend that she would find her friend and both of them would then always be together. Then combining their powers they unlocked their alters and destroyed the entire island both then saving the townspeople however causing terrible destruction, instantly transported to different worlds.
This occurred when Saya was merely 12.
Saya ‘s memory was completely erased however, one memory remains…She has to find the one she made a promise to years ago! That is her reason for living and that’s what she sets out to do. However this seems nearly impossible because she cant remember what he/she looked like or if he was a boy or a girl!
Now she travels the land in search of people to help her look for her friend.
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« Reply #27 on Jan 7, 2007, 8:02pm » | |
Quote:| Species: Human Experiment |
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The species would be : Human
Quote:| Wears a blue striped long scarf that flows behind her |
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If it's a striped scarf, there must be another colour. What is it?
Quote:She is petrified of being alone due to the time she had been experimented on
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"YET!"? What do you mean?
The sentence does not make sense.
Quote:| Healing : A strong healing spell capable of almost bringing the dead back to life |
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That's too powerful. If she can only heal others, it should take energy from her or something. There has to be some kind of weakness.
Quote:| Light sword: A sword made out of entirely jutsu is summoned. |
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What does it do? Can she wield it?
Does it cut through anything?
Quote:| Defensive Dragon: Lets Saya create a barrier between herself and the enemy wit a dragon made out of jutsu. |
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What does this dragon do? Is jutsu passable?
Does the dragon attack? How big is the dragon?
If it attacks, how powerful is it?
Quote:| friend to a planet with a research facility |
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How did they get there? Who took them there?
Quote:| or if he was a boy or a girl |
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This sort of gives it away.
Modify your bio a bit, and I'll rate it.
Oh, and maybe explain what "jutsu" is.
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« Reply #28 on Jan 7, 2007, 8:59pm » | |
Name: Saya/Nayru
Gender: Female
Age: 17
Species: Human Experiment
Appearance: Thin with long red hair tied up in two low ponytails… Has green determined eyes… Wears a rather short black kimono with short sleeves and long tights coming up past her knees. On the back of the kimono is an angel wing imprint. Wears a blue and dark red striped long scarf that flows behind her.
Personality: Saya is a happy go lucky girl yet shy at some times. She is very determined and never gives up. She may look naïve due to her appearance and does seem to have a childlike innocence. Therefore she seems to be always in trouble.
She likes ice cream (but manages to stay thin) meeting new people and learning the secret behind peoples techniches.
She is petrified of being alone due to the time she had been experimented on.
YET! ANOTHER PERSONA?AN ALTER?
Saya has an alter ego named Nayru who only appears when Saya fights or when Saya feels threatened. Nayru is vicious and feels nothing. In perspective Nayru is the person Saya secretly wishes to be.
Weapons: Saya has no weapons but rather a lost forgotten art called magic. When Saya fights her alter is awakened and her body filled with Strange markings that cover her entire body. These markings also glow a bright blue.
Abilities
Sakura Tornado: An ability that makes Saya summon a force spinning almost like a tornado and which slices the enemy with sakura petals (cherry blossoms)
Healing : A strong healing spell capable of almost bringing the dead back to life. This is the only ability Saya can use. However when it is used Saya trades some of her own life length to revive the person. Therefore she is wary of using it as it will ultimately shorten her own life.
Light sword: A sword made out of entirely magic is summoned. Naryu can wield it however the energy is so powerful that it sometimes ends up burning her hands. To some it would seem as if she is holding a sword made out of fire. This ability is very strong and Nayru only uses it as a last resort. It weakens her terribly.
Defensive Dragon: Lets Nayru create a barrier between herself and the enemy with a dragon made out of magic. The dragon’s size is determined by Nayru, she can manipulate it to her own size. The dragon merely defends and absorbs other attacks yet she can only use it for a short period of time.
(?) : Saya/Nayru once destroyed her entire home town with a strange power.
This power has only been unlocked once and Saya is terrified of ever using it again.
Saya is constantly trying to invent new magic and abilities. When fighting an opponent she will generally first let her opponent weaken her then after figuring out her opponent own ability swiftly deal the final blow.
Background: Saya was born on an island with a good friend on the same day. When she was merely 7 strange people in red cloaks covering their faces arrived on her island. They were very strong and overpowered the townspeople then using magic (which was unknown to the people on the island) transported her and her friend to a planet with a research facility where they were horribly experimented on. Saya ‘s friend managed to help her escape using the magic skills they had gained through experimentation and the two were teleported back to their island. However on returning the people who had taken them away was busy murdering all of the townsfolk in an effort to find Saya and her friend.
Saya panicking made a promise to her friend that she would find her friend and both of them would then always be together. Then combining their powers they unlocked their alters and destroyed the entire island both then saving the townspeople however causing terrible destruction, instantly transported to different worlds. That was when Saya ‘s alter or other personality, Nayru had been awakened.
This occurred when Saya was merely 12.
Saya ‘s memory was completely erased however, one memory remains…She has to find the one she made a promise to years ago! That is her reason for living and that’s what she sets out to do. However this seems nearly impossible because she cant remember what he/she looked like or if this person was a boy or a girl!
Now she travels the land in search of people to help her look for her friend.
OK I TRIED TO ANSWER ALL YOUR QUESTIONS...
I think...
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« Reply #29 on Jan 8, 2007, 7:23am » | |
You didn't answer all my questions.
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That's too powerful. If she can only heal others, it should take energy from her or something. There has to be some kind of weakness. |
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Quote:| Defensive Dragon: Lets Saya create a barrier between herself and the enemy wit a dragon made out of jutsu. |
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What does this dragon do? Is jutsu passable?
Does the dragon attack? How big is the dragon?
If it attacks, how powerful is it? |
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You only said how big it is.
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How did they get there? Who took them there? |
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You only said who took them there.
And I saw something else too.
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How did they get back?
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Alters?
Oh, and not everyone knows what chi is.
And modify your previous post next time.
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