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|  | Re: Training sign-up thread
« Reply #130 on Jul 30, 2007, 6:55am » | |
Well, that is certainly much better indeed. To be exact, I think it's quite good. Just a few points :
It's a bit too powerful to make 9 copies with 2/3 strength of the original, and in anyway, that's quite impossible I believe. If you are using a technique like Kage Bunshin No Jutsu, then it's different as the copies gets destroyed by one or two blows. Thus, either they get destroyed when someone hits them, or they have less power (1/9th being the obvious choice, or at least the power is divided among them. =P)
As another point, you might want to go deeper into the background (things such as where he grew up, how his life was, what he does now, ect), though just think about it. You may join the RP, THOUGH, remember, please don't assume the other characters knows yours, and also, you may kill aliens in your post if you so wish. =)
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| | Re: Training sign-up thread
« Reply #131 on Aug 3, 2007, 8:22pm » | |
Name: Selene
Species: Fae
Appearance: Selene has a smooth, near perfect face. Her distinguishing racial feature, true to her Fae kin, is the crimson red patterning on her face; she has a blood red tattoo mask, covering her eyes and bridge of her nose, extending down on both cheeks. It is out lined with black which travels down her neck in a swirling pattern. Black patterning outlines her deep crimson eyes inside which she has golden flecks in the iris much like the wild flame itself. She has long wavy autumn coloured hair that also retains the aspect of flame, when it is caught in the wind it is as if her hair has become flames.
She has a petite body, which is perfectly balanced. She is certainly no fighter though, wielding a sword is not her weapon, this reflects on her build. Selene's skin is a pale white, much like the eerie glow of the full moon. She has a complete humanoid form but she is far from human. She bears upon her back three sets of wings, top being butterfly, bottom, not too unlike bats, the middle a combination of both. In ratio to her body they are massive, the tips extending well above her head, beautifully coloured with white black and many different shades of the inferno.
With a height of about 5"7, she wares clothes which consist of wolf skin boots, brown cord like trousers, and a black corset; upon her head she bares a crown of fire. Draping down her winged back is a specially made long midnight blue cloak, with silver patterning inlaid in the material, which extends to the ground. The hood of which, when pulled up casts her face into shadow.
Personality: Neoma is reasonably aggressive, she can be very cruel to the mortal races, and even some immortal, but is one with nature as all Fae are. Her hate for humans runs deep in her species. She likes to take as little time as possible to think things over, but saying this she doesn't rush anything. she is a reasonably good battle mage and throughout the war of thorns she was constantly just behind the warriors in the front line, she hates cowards, anyone who attacks her from behind she will show no mercy to, if any one was to abandon someone for death (if they didn’t have to) she will cast her faerie glamour and make them drop their weapon. But to those of her own kind she is fair but still likes to creative with the truth, the worst insult which will send her into terrible rage as all other Fae is to be called a liar or an oath breaker.
Weapons/ abilities: Neoma has the same power as all other Fae, being made from magic they can harness magic of their own element, hers is Luna and fire. She can shield herself from physical attack and she knows disarming spells as well as shockwave. some of her other abilities is the ability to talk to dead as well as cast fear, a spell that may make the enemy filled with terror and make them flee.
The thing with Fae is that they don’t die. Well when I say that what I mean is that they can be dispersed from the physical world through there choice or through reasonable force (banishing spell.) that would be sent back to the world of Faerie. but if there physical forms dispersed through the way of being attacked then there spirit goes to the Summerland, to then be reincarnated into another form, but this other form keeps the same name, but can only remember small snippets of their past life. The only way that a Fae can die is if their concept dies, this is known to them as going to the well of ash. The only weapon she carries is a staff made of ebony, inset with a large ruby on top, which is slightly taller than her being 5"9.
Background: Little is understood about the Fae other than that they are only partially physical creatures, being made up half of the essence of magic. Due to the diverse physical appearances of the Fae, they are rarely treated as a race as a whole, and are more likely to be treated as individual characters. The physical appearance and lifestyle of the Fae has as many forms as can be imagined, however, the physical attributes of these creatures are always a reflection of their inner personality. Neoma's history is so long and well we wouldn’t want to ruin the mystery about her now would we. This is just a little taster of who and what Fae are, not many people know. But I will give you this, the concept of which she was born: Neoma was created when the first Luna eclipse (when the moon turns red) happened, hence her name meaning moon. Her true name means: The fire of the crimson moon... but I’m not telling you in what languages. If someone finds out a Fae’s true name they can make the Fae do what ever they wish and they cannot resist. Fae cannot lie but that also doesn’t mean that they tell the truth, they can be very creative at times.
(If you wish to know more on this species please don’t hesitate to PM me.)
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| | Re: Training sign-up thread
« Reply #133 on Aug 6, 2007, 6:47am » | |
Arlette, very cool bio, you are welcome to join the RP if you want (I'll check what's currently happening there), and you can get a rating if you do join.
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| | Re: Training sign-up thread
« Reply #134 on Aug 6, 2007, 3:12pm » | |
Thank you. I have made my post, as long and mighty as it may be.
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| | Re: Training sign-up thread
« Reply #135 on Aug 9, 2007, 12:59am » | |
I have my post written and I sent it to SSK. I did that because I defined somethings about the aliens and such, so I want to get his approval for posting it, or get any inputs from SSK of changes I need to make.
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| | Re: Training sign-up thread
« Reply #136 on Aug 9, 2007, 4:10am » | |
I posted, finally. Meaning, I am unofficially back for the time being. I still have alot to organize, but I had enough free time to write up a couple of extra posts.
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| | Re: Training sign-up thread
« Reply #137 on Aug 9, 2007, 7:09am » | |
Oki doki. =)
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| | Re: Training sign-up thread
« Reply #138 on Aug 10, 2007, 1:18am » | |
Arlette do you feel that your character has something to post? If there is an action that you think your character should perform now, then you should post. If not, then wait until there is an action for your character to perform.
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« Reply #139 on Aug 10, 2007, 6:21am » | |
That is very true.
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